1 Kings 9:24

Solomon built the terrace as soon as Pharaoh’s daughter moved up from the city of David ¹  to the palace Solomon built for her. ² 

After Pharaoh’s daughter had come up from the City of David to the palace Solomon had built for her, he constructed the supporting terraces.

As soon as Pharaoh’s daughter came up from the city of David to her house which Solomon had built for her, then he built the Millo.

After Solomon moved his wife, Pharaoh’s daughter, from the City of David to the new palace he had built for her, he constructed the Millo.

It was after Pharaoh's daughter ceremonially ascended from the City of David and took up residence in the house built especially for her that Solomon built the defense complex (the Millo).

At that time Solomon made Pharaoh’s daughter come up from the town of David to the house which he had made for her: then he made the Millo.

But Pharaoh’s daughter went up from the city of David to her own house that Solomon had built for her; then he built the Millo.

But Pharaoh’s daughter came up from the City of David to her house which Solomon had built for her. Then he built the Millo.

Solomon built the terrace as soon as Pharaoh’s daughter moved up from the city of David ¹  to the palace Solomon built for her. ² 

¹ sn The phrase city of David refers here to the fortress of Zion in Jerusalem, not to Bethlehem. See 2 Sam 5:7.

² tn Heb “As soon as Pharaoh’s daughter went up from the city of David to her house which he built for her, then he built the terrace.”