8:8 Then 1 the second angel blew his trumpet, and something like a great mountain of burning fire was thrown into the sea. A 2 third of the sea became blood,
9:7 Now 3 the locusts looked like horses equipped for battle. On 4 their heads were something like crowns similar to gold, 5 and their faces looked like men’s 6 faces.
1 tn Here καί (kai) has been translated as “then” to indicate the implied sequence of events within the vision.
2 tn Here καί (kai) has not been translated because of differences between Greek and English style.
3 tn Here καί (kai) has been translated as “now” to indicate the introduction of the description of the locusts, which is somewhat parenthetical in the narrative.
4 tn Here καί (kai) has not been translated because of differences between Greek and English style.
5 tn The translation attempts to bring out the double uncertainty in this clause in the Greek text, involving both the form (ὡς στέφανοι, Jw" stefanoi, “like crowns”) and the material (ὅμοιοι χρυσῷ, {omoioi crusw, “similar to gold”).
6 tn Or “human faces.” The Greek term ἄνθρωπος (anqrwpos) is often used in a generic sense, referring to both men and women. However, because “women’s hair” in the next clause suggests a possible gender distinction here, “men’s” was retained.