8:16 So the people went out and brought these things 6 back and constructed temporary shelters for themselves, each on his roof and in his courtyard and in the courtyards of the temple 7 of God and in the plaza of the Water Gate and the plaza of the Ephraim Gate.
11:3 These are the provincial leaders 8 who settled in Jerusalem. (While other Israelites, the priests, the Levites, the temple attendants, and the sons of the servants of Solomon settled in the cities of Judah, each on his own property in their cities,
1 tn Heb “my heart was advised upon me.”
2 tn Heb “nobles.”
3 tn Heb “taking a creditor’s debt.” The Hebrew noun מַשָּׁא (masha’) means “interest; debt” and probably refers to the collateral (pledge) collected by a creditor (HALOT 641-42 s.v.). This particular noun form appears only in Nehemiah (5:7, 10; 10:32); however, it is related to מַשָּׁאָה (masha’ah, “contractual loan; debt; collateral”) which appears elsewhere (Deut 24:10; Prov 22:26; cf. Neh 5:11). See the note on the word “people” at the end of v. 5. The BHS editors suggest emending the MT to מָשָׂא (masa’, “burden”), following several medieval Hebrew
4 tn Heb “his brothers.”
5 tn Heb “I gave.”
6 tn The words “these things” are not in the Hebrew text but have been supplied in the translation for clarity.
7 tn Heb “the house.”
8 tn Heb “the heads of the province.”