5:14 From the day that I was appointed 12 governor 13 in the land of Judah, that is, from the twentieth year until the thirty-second year of King Artaxerxes – twelve years in all – neither I nor my relatives 14 ate the food allotted to the governor. 15 5:15 But the former governors who preceded me had burdened the people and had taken food and wine from them, in addition to 16 forty shekels of silver. Their associates were also domineering over the people. But I did not behave in this way, due to my fear of God.
13:19 When the evening shadows 17 began to fall on the gates of Jerusalem before the Sabbath, I ordered 18 the doors to be closed. I further directed that they were not to be opened until after the Sabbath. I positioned 19 some of my young men at the gates so that no load could enter on the Sabbath day.
For this please remember me, O my God, and have pity on me in keeping with your great love.
1 tn Heb “have sinned.” For stylistic reasons – to avoid redundancy in English – this was translated as “committed.”
2 tn Heb “the house of my father.”
3 tn Or “forest.” So HALOT 963 s.v. פַּרְדֵּס 2.
4 tc One medieval Hebrew
5 tn The Hebrew text does not include the expression “these requests,” but it is implied.
6 tn Heb “the words of the king which he had spoken to me.”
7 tn Heb “Arise! Let us rebuild!”
8 tn Heb “strengthened their hands.”
9 tn Heb “my bosom.”
10 tn Heb “cause to stand.”
11 tn Heb “according to this word.”
12 tc The BHS editors suggest reading צֻוֵּאתִי (tsuvve’ti, “and I was appointed”) rather than the reading of the MT, אֹתִי צִוָּה (tsivvah ’oti, “he appointed me”).
13 tc The translation reads with one medieval Hebrew
14 tn Heb “brothers.”
15 tn Heb “the food of the governor.” Cf. v. 18.
16 tc The Hebrew term אַחַר (’akhar) is difficult here. It normally means “after,” but that makes no sense here. Some scholars emend it to אַחַד (’akhad) and supply the word “day,” which yields the sense “daily.” Cf. TEV “40 silver coins a day for food and wine.”
17 tn Heb “the gates of Jerusalem grew dark.”
18 tn Heb “said” (so also in v. 22).
19 tn Heb “caused to stand.”