5:4 We must pay money 1 for our own water; 2
we must buy our own wood at a steep price. 3
5:17 Because of this, our hearts are sick; 4
because of these things, we can hardly see 5 through our tears. 6
1 tn Heb “silver.” The term “silver” is a synecdoche of species (= silver) for general (= money).
2 tn Heb “We drink our water for silver.”
3 tn Heb “our wood comes for a price.”
4 tn Heb “are faint” or “are sick.” The adjective דַּוָּי (davvay, “faint”) is used in reference to emotional sorrow (e.g., Isa 1:5; Lam 1:22; Jer 8:18). The related adjective דָּוֶה (daveh) means “(physically) sick” and “(emotionally) sad,” while the related verb דָּוָה (davah) means “to be sad.” The cognate Aramaic term means “sorrow,” and the cognate Syriac term refers to “misery.”
5 tn Heb “our eyes are dim.” The physical description of losing sight is metaphorical, perhaps for being blinded by tears or more abstractly for being unable to see (= envision) any hope. The collocation “darkened eyes” is too rare to clarify the nuance.
6 tn The phrase “through our tears” is added in the translation for the sake of clarification.